Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Untitled good poem

Friendship is build on trust
when trust is lost, the ship will rust
both party will feel so frust
wondering how long will it last
watching it sinking so fast
and gone like a cloud of dust
why can't we just forget the past
rebuilt the sunken ship that we blast...



1) I dunno what to name this poem as, can any1 suggest to me?

2) Sorry to say that this poem doesn't meant for u as it only for those who never see this poem at all because their ship already sunken.
Glad that I m boarding in your ship ;-)

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Life's a Bitch,
And then you see one in office,
and if u r lucky, you will see two...

October 28, 2008 at 10:34 AM  
Blogger Kiran said...

how about "STs of friendship"?

October 29, 2008 at 3:07 AM  
Blogger Lily Maria said...

Welcome to TITANIC?

October 29, 2008 at 5:58 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Titanic?? then I will lost a lot of my friends drowning inside...

unsinkable konon...

November 1, 2008 at 1:33 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

frenship in ur eyes...

November 12, 2008 at 12:58 PM  

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